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The English writing class this week is very impressing. There are two points which make me shocked and impressed.The first one is a good thing.The teacher let us to write a story br turns. As far as I'm concerned,this is a very interesting assignment.Because of this opportunity,we can let our imagination fly high and broadly.However,there are some classmates writing something abnormal.For this,I adjust some words ,such as pen.The second thing making me surprised is the score of the article we wrote last week.The score last week was 82.However,after I rewriting the article with the guide of English teacher,the score I get this week is lower than the old one. Well.....,I don't know what's wrong about it.Is my looks too ugly or abnormal??